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[GA] jeanmarc
7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA]
4:04 PM (July 25, 2010)
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It was a normal day in Hogwarts, school of witchcraft and wizardry or as normal as a school in which teenage boys and girls learn magic could be normal. People were parcticing for duels, others were in the quidditch pitch, playing for the fun to play, others were in the library studying in many things for personnal enrighment or for future exams. I, JeanMarc, a Gryffindor prefect, was a part of it. I was going to Hagrid's house to have some time with this year's creature. Every wizard knows that Hagrid always have new creatures each year. What was going to appear the following year was always a mystery. The school year started not so long ago but long enough to have lots of homework (or schoolwork in that case) already. But what took my attention since the school's beginning was Hagrid new pet: a dragon. Everyone knew that it was dangerous but Professor McGonagall, the headmaster, let Hagrid have it so students would know what to do when they'd see one. I liked the dragon and was starting to be friends with the dragon. He had Hagrid's permission to feed him everyday. I just finished feeding him and was now petting him. I was now going to the Quidditch pitch to see people training, eating bertie bott beans and holding Gryffindor's Sword. Indeed, I had the legendary Sword of Gryffindor. During his fifth school year, I saved a student by using the Sword. After that event, people saw that I was Gryffindor's heir and gave him his rightful inheritance. Not so long after that, his wand broke. I tried to use his sword sometime after that. I then was surprised when he saw that it worked very well. I then entered Quidditch Pitch. Who was training? It was...

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[DA] kenman89
5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA]
8:32 PM (July 25, 2010)
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kenman89. he had the quaffle and was friends with jeanmarc. he dodged both of the bludgers. you see, ken had his own bludgers, quaffle and snitch. he charmed his bludger so he could get better reflex's. he threw the quaffle into the goal and made but then was hit by a bludger. his firebolt broke instantly.he used the reparing spell reparo and fixed it right. and then got the bludger's back in the box. he grabbed his wands and dodge the brooms of the first year's learning to fly.
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[GA] jeanmarc
7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA]
9:09 AM (July 26, 2010)
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"Hey, Ken!" I shouted, happy to see him, "Wait for me!"
Ken and I were good friend and were both in the quidditch team. We loved to train together and teach to the new ones some tricks and to entertain them. "Accio Nimbus 2001!" Indeed, I had a nimbus 2001. My family was rich and had lots of money but didn't want me to be too babyish and wanted me to learn that you must work to win your life. Of course, I could get presents for birthdays and Christmas but that's all. I almost have enough money for a Firebolt but I knew what I'd do: I'd send them my money and ask them for a Firebolt for Christmaas. Until then, I'm practicing with a Nimbus 2001. "Accio Nimbus!" I shouted. My Nimbus 2001 came flying. I took it and it. "How could it be that when I say Accio Nimbus 2001, why is it always mine? Why isn't there more than one or another Nimbus 2001 that comes here? It doesn't matter as long as it's mine" I tought. "Hey Ken, what's up? How are thing going on lately?"
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[DA] kenman89
5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA]
3:06 PM (July 26, 2010)
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"good." then suddenly some hufflepuff girls came screaming. to come and get us. you see we were the best wizards at hogwarts. " their are death eaters in the great hall and the teachers are gone. HELP" !!! they screamed. I jumped off of his broom but he forgt he was in the middle of the air. "accio firebolt"! I screamed. then my firebolt went down and i grabbed it and flew to the great hall. "exepellarumus" I screamed.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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5:44 PM (July 26, 2010)
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I then flew to the Great Hall. Once there, I dropped my Broom. I pulled out my sword. I slashed a Death Eater. I stunned another one. Only two remaining. I pulled my Broom up and I began to fly with it. I slashed another one. Only one remaining. Ken already took care of two and was taking care of the last one. I knew he'd be okay so I began to protect the others. There were two injured persons. Other than these two, Ken, the Death Eaters and I, the room was empty. I shouted "Mobilicorpus". One of the the two students, a slytherin girl, was floating over the ground. "How could I take care of the second student? Of course!" I thought. I picked a wand from a dead Death Eater. "Mobilicorpus!" I shouted again. The other student, a Ravenclaw boy, lifted and was now floating over the ground. I then was travelling in everywhere in the school to the infirmary. I put each of them in one bed. I now shouted "Accio Nimbus 2001!" I took my Nimbus 2001 and flew to the Great Hall. "I'm sure that Ken is okay, I think..."
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[DA] kenman89
5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA]
6:17 PM (July 26, 2010)
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i was on the ground. arm bleeding. i looked over and saw jeanmarc. " dont worry i am okay" i said instantly. i grabbed my wand and then we both ran to Professor Dumbledore's office.
but going up i saw my rival. A Slthyiren chaser. i gripped my wand even tighter. "what are you in here for today Ben? i said, use spells on another first year"? " yes i did. but this one diservied it. He bumped into me when i was letting some friends in from a far away place" he said. He is the one, he let them in, i thought. but i could be sure. i knocked on the door but then i hear yelling. i knocked on the door even harder. the yelling stopped and then the door open. " hello ken and jeanmarc" dumbledore said. " Come in. me and the minister are having a little chat. we will be right back". then they both walked out. but then the odest thing happen. a closet opened. me and jeanmarc looked in it. and then we where in somewhere very odd. We were in the past!
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[GA] jeanmarc
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6:30 PM (July 26, 2010)
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How could it? We, in the past? Dumbledore, the legendary Dumbledore, was alive again. I couldn't believe it. What could I do? I was stunned. We knew that Dumblemdore died more than 10 years ago and Harry defeated Voldemort back then. What could've possibly happened? Where was Ben? Wait, Ben... Ben... "Hey Ken!" I shouted "Where Ben?"
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[DA] kenman89
5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA]
8:01 AM (July 27, 2010)
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" i dont know , I shouted. where our we. wait, the past!!! WE ARE IN DUMBLEDOR'S PENSIVE. we gotta get out of here. but how"? i grabbed my wand and gripped it tighter than every before. i looked directly at the person in chanes. it was ludo bagman!!!! i couldnt belive this. ludo bagman, a death eater. i grapped my wand. "alohamora" i shoudted trying to unlock the chanes. nothing. i jumped over and looked face to face. my hero. a death eater.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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12:38 PM (July 28, 2010)
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"Wait! He might be just imperioed. I think someone made us come here with the same magic as the time turner. I think they/he/she want us to change something in the past!" I said to Ken. Now what should I do? How could I free someone from chains? Wait... I remember hearing about Hermione using a spell that mugh work. What is it again? Oh yeah. It's "Relashio" I shouted, freeing Ludo. Now, I'll stop the Imperio charm. "Finite Incantatem!" He now also looked like people always knew him. "What happened?" I said.
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[GA] kenman78
4th Year Student
7:55 PM (July 28, 2010)
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" he, the dark lord. he trtured me. it was horrible." i grabbed my wand. i turned. i saw him, the man from my dream. i grabbed me wand. "sectumsempta" I said. blood poured everywhere. i hand my wand just in case someone caught us. " run, RUN NOW" i said. the gaurds where after jeanmarc, ludo, and I were all running. " stupfy" i yelled at the gaurds. we were running has fast as we could. i grabbed my wand and said " REDUCDO " and the door flew open. but then the gaurds shut it. i jumped and broke through the door. " accio firebolt" me and ludo said. and jeanmarc said " accio nimbus 2000". i couldn't belive it. i just exsacped from the gaurds. i smiled.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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6:09 AM (July 29, 2010)
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Inly Ludo's firebolt came. "I don't beleive it! We actually forgot that WE were in the past, in the time where we didn't exist and where we didn't have our brooms. "I have am idea! Levicorpus!" I shouted, my wand pointed at Ken. he lifted up upside-down. "sorry, but I thought of the first solution that came to me. He now was a little bit over the rooftop. "Liberacorpus!" I now shouted. Now, dementors were surrounding me. I needed to think of something happy. I thought of when I got my sword. "Expecto Patronum!" A lion came out of my wand and destroyed the dementors. "Hurry up! Lift me!" He then repeated the process that I did to him. "Let's go, fast!" I said.
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[GA] kenman78
4th Year Student
10:39 AM (July 29, 2010)
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i couldn't belive it. i was flying. "we have to get out of here" i said. i flew up and then burst out and was back in the present. i pulled out jeanmarc. "whoa , i said. we have to get back to the great hall, hogwarts isnt as save has it used to be". we ran threw the halls. watching people destroy hogwarts. i saw some people fighting back. hearing spells. i knew somthing ws up. even though voldemort was dead someone has token over the death eaters. i thought of who it would be. karkaroff. he is the only big death eater who wasn't killed. " i will get the big guy and you help out with the other's to defend hogwarts" i said. i grabbed my wand and ran to the great hall. i saw big expolsions. "stupfy" karkaroff said expecting me or jeanmarc. i flew back word and breaking glass. "you excaped" i said. "avada kedavra" he said. "EXPELLERUMUS" i screamed immeditly. both of are spells touched. it happen like no other spell i had seen. then i jumped has hard as i could dodging the death curse. when i saw jeanmarc run in and dive from and expolsion. "stupfy" we all yelled and then the spells expolded. we all flew back.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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12:47 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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"Expelliarmus!" a Death Eater shouted, disarming Ludo. The Death Eater pointed both wands on him. That's right I thought, I can save him! "Catch!" I threw the wand I took from the Death Eater in the present. Ludo took the wand and disapparated. I could understand him. I was scared of my enemies too but I needed to do it. I then saw the Firebolt falling on the ground. "Accio Firebolt!" I shouted. I took Ludo's Firebolt. I flew at high speed lunging at Karkaroff. He shouted the killing curse, pointing at me. I blocked the spell with my sword, absorbing the curse. I then stabbed him in the chest, killing Karkaroff. Dumbledore came in the room, stunning the other Death Eaters. "When are we?" I asked. "About 7 years before where you came from." Dumbledore responded. " How could it be that you're here?" I asked. "The resurrection stone." he replied. "Oh... I understand. Can you send us in the present?" I asked. "Yes, I can." He then said. We then saw everyone walking in and out of the room in fast motion. We were now back in the present.
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[GA] kenman78
4th Year Student
2:37 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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but then suddenly karkaroff was still alive. he was alive by a little bit. he grabbed my foot. when we got back to the present he brought all of the death eaters back. but the very last one. i gasped. lord voldemort. i grabbed my wand and said " jeanmarc we need to get a army. grab everyone except years 1-3. the rest make sure they have brooms and wands. i will hold the death eaters has long has i can. you will see fireworks from the great hall when i am about to die". i turned and made sure jeanmarc got out safely. " ACCIO FIREBOLT" i shouted. " i jumped on to the broom when all of the ghosts came in. " accio sword of slytherin". even though it was slytherien i could have used a sword. i went down and cut abotu 10 death eaters head off. i kicked voldemort. but then he made and portal in just me and him. we were in a grave yard. i said mumbo jumbo hoping it would send jeanmarc right here but nothing happened. the i transported red sparks into the great hall. i grabbed my wand. "wheres your nose voldey, cut off? EXEPELLREUMUS" i shouted " AVADA KEDRVA" voldemort said. then i thought this is it. if i defeat him, we win, and if i dont we lose. but then it struck me. i flew back words. " morsmorada" voldemort said. my eyes opened. time had froze. i got up. then i went back in time. i was holding my wand with the spells up. then jeanmarc came in with karkaroff. they were dueling. " DONT WORRY, I GOT VOLDEMORT" i shouted to jeanmarc. then the spells stopped and voldemort flew backwords and then i reallized i did it, i deafeted lord voldemort. i turned and jeanmarc killed karkaroff. " do you know a transporting spell"? i said.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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3:12 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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It's over. Voldemort is defeated again... Wait a second... Again!? It all looked like deja-vu. Voldemort defeated, all death-eater dead... Right! The war against Harry! "Look out Ken!" I shouted. Too late. Voldemort shouted: "Avada Kedavra!" The spell was flying towards Ken. I threw my sword towards Ken. The spell hit Ken? I didn't know, I wasn't in a good angle. All I knew was that Ken was falling on the ground and the two swords were flying up high. I flew as fast as I could and I caught my sword, thanks to my seeker talents. Voldemort caught the other one. SO it's a heir vs heir battle isn't it? Voldemort then threw a killing curse at me. I blocked it with my sword. He then transformed into black smoke and lunged at me with the sword. The two swords hit eachother. I then saw a crack on the Slytherin's sword. I made a push, making Voldemort go back a little bit. I then attacked the crack. The sword broke and grey liquid came out of both parts. *Just as I thought. It was another Horcrux.* I then slash Voldemort with the Sword. Voldemort was killed instatly, thanks to the two killing curses that it had absorbed. I then ran to see Ken. He was still breathing. That was a good thing. The sword absorbed what could've made it stronger: the killing curse. We then saw Ludo Bagman come in. "Hi there kids! What happened? Why did he faint? And do I feel I saw you two before?" he said. I then showed his Firebolt. "It's yours. You forgot it after you disapparated when we freed you when we freed you from the chains." I replied. "Oh... You wet to the past to save me!? You can keep the Firebolt for you to remember that adn for the wand." he then said. "Thank you, mister bagman. I'll take care of it." I then said. "Why are you here, by the way?" "I'm here to take the place of flying lessons teacher." he then said. "Awesome!" I immediatly replied. "Rennervate!" I then said pointing the sword at Ken. Ken then regained conciousness.
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[GA] kenman78
4th Year Student
3:35 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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but that didnt help all that much. i was still in bad pain. i held my wand in my hand. i coughed. and then some hufflepuff girls came over and where looking at me and jeanmarc. i got up. i couldnt move my arm at all. i will be alright i said. we need to look for any other survivor's. i then jumped up and looked around for any survivors. then i turned and a hufflepuff girl came up and kissed me and another one for jeanmarc. i saw one survivor and then all four of us ( me, jeanmarc,and both hufflepuff girls ) well we were all alright. and even though i was a 5th year ( using my old account year ) i graduated thanks to the acts that we did today. and same with the girls. and then we all lived happly ever after.
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[GA] jeanmarc
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5:43 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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As I sensed something touching my back, I took a couple of steps forward and turned my body and saw the Hufflepuff girl. She tried to jump in my arms but I dodged leftside. She fell on the ground. Before she had time to get up and try again, I silently used a desillusionment charm on myself and escaped to the common room. Once I was in front of the Fat Lady, I stopped the spell. I said the password and entered in the boys' room. I was packing my things up. I heard footsteps behind me. I turned my head and it was...
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[GA] jeanmarc
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6:53 PM (Aug 3, 2010)
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hello?
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Hermione, Ron and Harry on their brooms