[GA] jeanmarc 7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA] 7:52 AM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) Subject: First Task (Out of four) Reply Introduction:
3 generations after the books, JeanMarc, new director of hogwarts, decided to create a tournament for the bravest, strongest and wisest wizards of the school. The four chosen wizards were gathered in front of the forbidden forest. Supporters from Gryffindor, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff houses were here. Most of the Slytherins tought that this was a waste of time since there was only gryffindor but some nice Slytherins (sorry but there are exceptions) were still here to give some courage to the contestants."Okay, you guys will have one hour to get right in the middle of the forest to hear a magic voice that will tell you a clue about the one of the future tasks. You'll have one hour to go there because, after the hour, there's a meeting of centaurs right at the exact same place. Don't worry: once you're there, there will be a Portkey for each of you, taking you back to the entrance of Hogwarts."
List to do:
Get 650 in Forest Fall
Write a story about how you got in the center of the forbidden forest.
1)You can pick an item in the forest and use it in the following tasks if accio is accepted
2)This will be due Saturday morning
Accio:Yes
Brooms:No
See achother:Yes
Hurt Eachother:No
You can only use accio on your items or items that normal students would have (In other words, no deathly Hallows, unique items, Firebolt or other rare magical items.)
And remember, the criterias are:
Description: /10
Flow of Text and clear writing: /10
Mini-Game score: /10
Spelling Spells: /10
Sportsmenship (or sportswomenship): /10
Another note: You won't obtain 10/10 in Mini-Game score if you only have the score asked:
1)660 to 699 is 9
2)700 and up is 10
The score counting is your personnal record.
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[Phoe] Silver 6th Year Student - Captain of Team [Phoe] 9:25 AM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) Silver is jumping down tree from tree and shouts lumos! and his wand lights up and he continues bbut then he trips and falls from a high distance and breaks his left arm blood was coming out of it so he knew he was going to have to hurry. Suddenly a werewolf comes out and scratches his left eye and it is bleeding then silver shouts "Stupefy" and it stuns the wolf he says "accio quaffle" and it increases his speed running rapidly a dementor comes out and it attacks him but he has not passsed out so he shouts "Expecto Patronum" and it dissapears then shadow swings on a tree branch and flings himself on a branch then he hops to another branch but he slips and he has one hand holding on to it but the branch breaks and silver falls and keeps on hitting branches and falls until he gets to the center and sees the portkey but then he hears a magical voice then he limps towards the portkey but he was to late the centaurs were their but then he says "accio portkey" and he grabs it and he goes back to the beggining of ther forest were the director is and he limps with blood leaking and passes out but when he wakes up he is in the hospitol wing but he finished the task and got a good score.
[DA] kenman89 5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA] 9:56 AM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) ken is really scared. he takes is wand out and say " lumnos". ken ran with is wand in the air. he is running and he sees hears the voice. he looks back. and sees nothing. and ken ran to the voice and grab's the portkey and then is returned to the judge's to wait for his score. but then he is returned to the forest. he doesnt know why he is here. then he see a girl. ken runs to go over to her but she runs away. WAIT!! ken said. he points his wand at him and says " stupfey". she falls on the ground and ken goes to see her. turns out she is just a a person but she had a wand. she pointed it at ken. " expellerumus" she said. ken dives to the portkey and grabs it. then he is finnally returned to the judge's and will not go back.
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trey 6th Year Student 11:46 AM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) Trey heads into the Forbidden Forest, mutters the spell "Lumos." Which gives Trey a more visible path through the forest. Trey moves through the forest at a trot. Trey thinks to himself "This is Easy." A few minutes later Trey encounters several large trees blocking his path. Trey first uses "Mobilarus" hoping that he will be able to move the fallen trees. The trees shook a little bit but that was all it did. Trey then used "Expulso" hoping that he could literally blow up the fallen trees. All that happened was that the trees caught on fire, but wouldn't burn. Trey then realized he had to climb the tree to get to the middle of the forest. Trey climbed a rather large tree with many branches. When Trey reached the top, he jumped to the next tree. His fingers grabbed onto the branch but it could not support his weight. so he fell down to the bottom of the tree. Trey only injury was a large gash in his leg. Trey said "Ferula" and bandages appeared on his leg, he then headed towards the middle of the forest using the four point spell do give him directions. When he arrived at the middle of the Forbidden Forest he heard the voice. Trey then touched the port key and was back at the entrance of the forest.
trey 6th Year Student 11:56 AM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) Great Writing Silver and Kenman
[Phoe] Silver 6th Year Student - Captain of Team [Phoe] 1:25 PM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) yours was pretty good too
[GA] hermione_rox 6th Year Student 4:13 PM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) i give up. i cant do this anymore. i dont have the time. my grandpa is dying and NONE of you people know what i go through at home.
[DA] kenman89 5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA] 5:21 PM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) yeah well i dont know where the f**k my dad is so im the man in the house. that is not cool for a fourteen year-old.
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[GA] jeanmarc 7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA] 6:42 PM (Jan 31, 2010) (show avatars?) So that means Hashim can take you place can he?
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hashim98 7th Year Student 8:24 AM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) Hashim98 enters the Forbidden Forest and said ''Lumos'' so that a light appears at the end of his wand. He walks for a long way until he heard noise of cracking twigs, Hashim98 got scared and turned around to see what made the noise, he saw nothing and turned back around thinking that he imagined it. And just that moment werewolf and i quickly shouted ''STUPEFY'' and the werewolf flew backwards and hit a tree, Hashim98 thought that he was done but he was wrong, what he just did made the werewolf angrier and it strted running at him again and Hashim98 yelled ''INCARCEROUS'' and ropes flew out of the end of his wand and tied the werewolf but it simply just ripped them of. Hashim98 was really starting to panick now he then had an idea and yelled ''AVIS'' and many birds were apearind out of the end his wand and the werewolf was distracted and Hashim98 ran around him and touched the portkey.He was then returned and awaited the judges marks.
[GA] poopypants78 6th Year Student 10:03 AM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) really hermione rox? my grandpas MOM died yesterday!
hashim98 7th Year Student 10:51 AM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) I am really sorry for you poopypants and you too Hermoine_Rox.javascript:insemot('

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[GA] hermione_rox 6th Year Student 5:29 PM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) Yeah, thanks hashim. and poopypants, i know its hard to have someone dead in the family. my grandpa just died. but you dont have to be a jerk about it.

[GA] poopypants78 6th Year Student 6:35 PM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) was that an isult? im confused because it dosent sound to bad to me?ps: i wasent trying to yell and think thats more imortant.
[GA] hermione_rox 6th Year Student 6:56 PM (Feb 1, 2010) (show avatars?) Okay, but i dont understand what you think is important. and i wasn't trying to insult you

[DA] kenman89 5th Year Student - Captain of Team [DA] 7:56 AM (Feb 2, 2010) (show avatars?) i quit. this is just boring. so im out.
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[GA] jeanmarc 7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA] 8:03 AM (Feb 2, 2010) (show avatars?) Okay, Kenman quits, Poopypants you're in.
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[GA] poopypants78 6th Year Student 3:37 PM (Feb 2, 2010) (show avatars?) accualy i change my mind because im tired of writing LONG storys.im out
[GA] jeanmarc 7th Year Student - Captain of Team [GA] 7:23 AM (Feb 3, 2010) (show avatars?) Description: 4/10
There weren't much description in that.
Flow of Text and clear writing: 10/10
Perfectly clear and the flow was good
Mini-Game score: 10/10
1000= Automatic 10
Spelling Spells: 10/10
Nothing to say here
Sportsmenship (or sportswomenship): 10/10
Nothing to say there too.
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