since when where YOU the person that tells me what I can do and what I cant do?

Eric is right. I'm not a judge but I'll tell what I think about the stories

Poopypants:
6 adult wizards can't stun a dragon and 1 student can stun it. Impossible. The dragon has fire in it, you can't burn it sice he's partially made of fire. At least expressed how your character felt.

Kenman:
You used an unforgivable spell. The story was so short that there is nothing good to tell.

Eric is a judge poopypants. As so is Xavier.

o ok then then look back at my thread because i edit it

jeanmarc i havnt done mine yet that was a example cause you guys didnt get it at all.

Jeanmarc= i'd say 9/10

A aguamenti spell isnt enough to calm down a dragon breaths.

Poppypants=3/10

1. You changed your text.
2. And a dragon would prefer meat than a shiny wand during the day.

guys that was my example plus i am a judge but i dont count for myself i count for everybody else. soo guys im head judge im doing this for fun. im a judge so x me out.

OKay then, can you judge poopypants and myself.

yes

jeanmarc,

writing and spelling of spells 7/10
good story telling 10/10
good sportmenship 5/10
comnets

jeanmarc it was good but that post you posted for poopypnats wasnt nice so your points are 21 out of 30.but - 5 points. i said no swords. only wands. so 16/30

"Hermione Granger, your next!" came the voice of professor dumbledore, from the highest seat in the whole pitch.
As she walked out onto the quidditch pitch, where she was about to fight a dragon, she heard "whoo's" and "boo's" from the large crowd surrounding her. Mostly "whoo's" but there was a large banner reading, "Granger stinks" coming from the slytherin side of the stands.
"no," she thought to herself, "i can do this. i wont let malfoy and his croonies ruin this."
what surprised hermione most was the size of the beast 50 feet in front of her. with horns on the top of its head, and spikes running all the way down its spine, and down its long tail. it had claws the size of her arm with legs the size of her body. its huge gleaming orange eyes were staring into hers, ready to strike; and its golf-ball sized nostrils were fuming. its scaly reddish-brown scales were shining in the daylight. It had wings the size of a flattened car, which looked like giant frog's feet.
the huge dragon began walking forward, with fire in his eyes. then without warning he shot fire from his cavernous mouth. it was heading straight for hermione but she ran out of the way and behing a boulder just in time. she tried to stun the dragon with "STUPEFY" but it had no effect.
"i wish i had a bottle of felix felicis. then i would be able to get past the dragon." thought hermione.
but instead she just pulled out her wand and yelled: "incendio!" and a huge glowing flame shot out from her wand. she threw it towards the dragon and shouted "glisseo!" which turned the ground into a giant slide, much faster to get away from the dragon.
she saw the dragon flying away from the fire and yelled "EVANESCO!" but she missed. instead, she made one of the huge goalposts vanish from the pitch. she tried again "EVANESCO!" but missed, vanishing the long chain which the dragon was attached to. the dragon now flew around freely, and was getting higher and hight by the minute.
She glanced over at the huge boulder and suddenly got an idea: what if she put an engorgement charm onto it, and made it grow taller?
Hermione clambered onto the boulder and yelled, "ENGORGIO!" the boulder began to grow, taller and taller it went, when it suddenlt came to a halt, almost knocking her off. she was about 60 feet into the air, the dragon was 10 feet infront of her... she could get it... but out of nowhere came the huge, spiky tail of the hungarian horntail. the tail hit her square in the shoulder and she felt a warm wetness on her robes. the dragon had slashed a deep gash into her arm, and was just hovering in the air, right in front of her. Hermione summoned the only strength she had, and pulled out her wand. she yelled "CONJUNCTIVITIS!" and the dragon couldnt see anthing, making it weaker, and easier to attck. then she yelled, "LANGLOCK!" and the dragon's tongue glued to the roof of his mouth, making him unable to breath fire. and, then, with the only ounce of energy she had left she yelled: "PORTUS!" and the boulder she was standing on turned blue. before she knew it she was spinning out of control. she closed her eyes tight and next second she was laying beside the huge golden egg.
She had done it, she had gotten past the dragon.

The end of task one!

poopypants,

wirting of spells 5/10
good sportmenship 10/10
good storytelling 7/10

comnets

well some of the spells you used werent doing there right effect. stupfey cannot stun a hungroian horntail but you follow the rules so i give you a 21/30

hermione,

spelling spells and writing 10/10
goodsport menship 10/10
good story telling 10/10

comnets

hermione you did a good job. but you used spells that dont exscits but otherwise great story telling but im taking away 7 of your points because of that. but otherwise that was a great story. 23 out of 30

hey the spells that i used do exist!! tell me what you think dont exist and ill prove you wrong!

writing and spelling of spells 7/10
good story telling 10/10
good sportmenship 5/10

OBJECTION!

My goal isn't to insult Poopypants, I was just stating facts that were written in the books in what he did wrong, I didn't insult him, I just told him what he could do better. I also told what he did good. Tell me what in that isn't in sportmenship? Telling what to improve isn't supposed to increase the sportmenship?

was that rating for my story? if so, why did you say i didnt get full marks on speels. do you think they are not real too?

writing and spelling of spells 7/10
good story telling 10/10
good sportmenship 5/10

OBJECTION!

My goal isn't to insult Poopypants, I was just stating facts that were written in the books in what he did wrong, I didn't insult him, I just told him what he could do better. I also told what he did good. Tell me what in that isn't in sportmenship? Telling what to improve isn't supposed to increase the sportmenship? And you said I could have my sword, as long as I didn't slash with it. Which was respected. I use my sword the same way Hagrid uses his umbrella

And Hermione indeed only used existing spells. And why have I gotten only 7 in spelling of spells? Please be more clear when you give your score.

yeah, pls take no offence, but i think you should be more descriptive, like my story

You're telling that to who? Me or Poopypants?

not you OR poopypants, im talking to kenman89

Sorry but your information about spells is bad. Here's the proof that Hermione Rox only used real spells and that I didn't make spelling mistakes with my spells:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spells_in_Harry_Potter